Friday 27 January 2012

Walking Poetry

Another long walk today.  I came home and wrote a poem about unrequited love.



I wish I had never set eyes on your beautiful face


Your knowing eyes

Your enigmatic smile


I wish I could forget you

I wish I could release my caged heart

And breathe again


I wish the tears would stop flowing

I wish I could stop the yearning

And live again


I wish I had never set eyes on your beautiful face

I wish your beautiful face

Was on mine


Simone Whipp 27 January 2012

8 comments:

  1. Wow - walking obviously gets the creative juices flowing.

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  2. Walking definitely seems to agree with you Simone! Well done!
    Have a lovely weekend,
    V x

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  3. Simone, that is stunning! Keep walking my dear.

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  4. Simone,

    This is quite beautiful. Dare I ask if you are writing about a personal experience? Forgive me for being overly curious.

    Have a peaceful weekend.

    Stephanie

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  5. You were certainly inspired by your walk, Simone. Lovely thoughtful poem and stunning photo!

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  6. What a lovely poem, aren't you clever.

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  7. aw, simone
    i wish i could give you a real hug

    your poem is very moving and beautiful
    you really have a gift for writing

    i have sadly still not got your beads in the post, the people that usually post things for me are either away or very busy right now. i have decided that as they are going to arrive rather late for the necklace i will add a few more so that you can make a little bracelet to go with it, i'll also send a couple of the little calcite crytals i've found in our field too.

    warmest imbolc wishes xxx

    sumea

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